BBQ...

The details are as below:

Date: 13 Nov 2010(Sat)
Time: 2 to 5pm
Address: Marymount View, 11 Pemimpin View

Any queries:
email mrs cheng: chelsia_loh@moe.edu.sg

Happy Holidays!!!

Map: http://condo.singaporeexpats.com/condo-details-MARYMOUNT-VIEW.htm

Homework that hand up tmw

Dear 5 kindness,
This is the homework for today
Chinese
普通话文考卷
高华考卷
四块本
Maths
Bring RGPS paper tmw

Thats all for today. For the 普通考卷，if u had finished it, the answers are on Wang Lao Shi's blog.

Planning from Matthew Chuang

Link
: https://docs.google.com/document/pub?id=1_DagTcmlTuf7NqvOvayDY0vS5kU1zTSAc51Bw7eh3H8

Darren Heng's Compo planning for Fire

Intro:

• “Help! Fire!” a woman screamed as she raised her hand and ran around like a headless chicken.
• Then, the newscaster continued with her speech, telling everyone about the fire that took place at a flat.
• It jolted my memory as I recollected that fateful day…

Body 1:

• “Help! Fire!” screams pierced the air as smoke was billowing out of a flat. The raging fire licked the walls as it was almost unstoppable.
• The intense heat filled the area as the miniature inferno only grew bigger.
• I watched the wooden windows get charred as I shipped out my phone to call for the fire department. “Help! Ahhh!” a high pitched voice rang from the tenth storey window. However, she never got to finish her sentence when an explosion blew her and a flaming wooden chair out of the room. The mushroom cloud that formed almost reduced the visibility to near zero. My heart thumped as the wait was endless. We helplessly watched the building being destroyed.

Climax:

• When the fire department and police arrived, they sprang into action. Policemen cordoned the place off. Some firemen brought fire extinguishers to start putting out the fire at once. While others attached a house to a fire hydrant.
• Most of the fireman dashed into the burning building in search of the source of the fire and survivors in the flames. The rest stood outside the building to spray jets of water into the building. Their coordination was incredible.

Ending:

• Soot was arising as visibility was near zero. Reporters and television crews appeared at the scene.
• The firemen rescued all the survivors and had put out the fire already.
• They walked out of the building towards the media with their chest up high. The reporters asked a string of questions to the firemen

Planning(Fire)

Introduction-
-Memories
-At my primary six graduation , I saw Mr.Cheng , the guest-of-honor.
-When he went on stage , he exclaimed , “fire is a good servant but a bad master.”
-It jolted my memory as I recollected that fateful day…

Body 1-
-I was left alone at home as my parents were working the night shift at a nearby factory.
-They usually put me to bed before going to work.

Body 2-
-However, I could not sleep that night. I got up to have a snack in the kitchen.
-I saw the stove and remembered my mother cooking on it earlier.
-I decided to play with it.
-I fiddled with the switches on the stove.
-Soon after, I was bored with it and went to the living room to play.
-I saw a box of matches left on the coffee table.

Climax 1-
-I was playing with the matches when there was a sudden explosion!
-I had left the switch on and gas had leaked into the living room!
-The furniture caught fire and soon, it had become very hot in the flat.
-My eyes flew open in fear at the scene and I rushed to the door to escape.
-However, the gate was locked and I panicked.

Climax 2-
-I screamed, “ Help! I am trapped! Someone please help me! I don’t want to die!” A neighbour heard my screams and quickly called the fire brigade
-Neighbours rushed out of their houses with big pails of water to put out the fire.
-Someone came with a set of pliers and managed to break open the gate. A very relieved me came tumbling out of the flat.

Conclusion-
--In the meantime, a neighbour had called my parents to inform them about what had happened.
-By the time they came home, the firemen had already put out the fire. Tears rolled down my eyes as I confessed to my parents that I had caused the fire.

Ending(Coda) –
-It was a sleepless night for my family as we had to salvage our valuables from our flat before making a police report and making arrangements to stay with a relative.
-Indeed, fire is a good servant but a bad master.

Planning for Fire Compo

By Aaron

Zac's Planning:

Robbery:

Robbery-planning

Intro-Walking home from football/basketball game.

-Decided to take shortcut because of curfew/time.

Body1-Walking through shortcut.

-Description: Odour, smell.

-Darkness(night)was approaching.

Walked faster.

Body2-Football/basketball accidentally rolled into one of the side alleys.

-Went to pick it up but got lost in alley.

-Walked into a gloomy-looking area.

-Description-fear.

Climax1-Felt knife/dagger at throat.

-A gruff voice saying"Hand over your valuables!"

-Description-=fear

-Handed over money.

-A firm voice, shouted"stop where you are!"

-Turned out to be police officer

Climax2-Police chased after the robber/thief/mugger.

-Description:Running, shouting.

-Caught thief.

-Description:Relief

Conclusion:-Police explained why they were there at that time.

-Safely got home

Coda:

Swore not to take shortcuts....punctual....

Fire:

Intro-Lying in hospital bed

-Flashback

Body1-At home doing homework

-Alone with baby brother

-Baby brother-playing with matchsticks

Body2-Baby brother accidentally lit matchsticks

-Baby brother drops the match sticks on the sofa in surprise

-You try to extinguish the fire but no avail

-The fire spread

Climax1-Passerby called fire department

-Description:flames

-Hid in bedroom ,trapped

-Sirens of fire brigade could be heard

-Firemen came through window

-Rescued baby brother and I.

-Fire turned into raging inferno;spread to other houses

-Firemen got people out safely.

-You got burned;wounds being treated by paramedics.

-Description of chaos/firemen

Climax2-Suddenly, baby's wailing could be heard from 18th floor.

-A brave fireman climbed up ladder to rescue the baby.

-Description of tension.

-Fireman(at last)came out with baby.

-Description-joy/relief

-You got taken to hospital to get wounds treated.

Ending-Wounds treated

Incident etched in mind...

Coda-Fire is a good servant but a bad master...

Accident:

Intro-Walking home from*place*.

-Could not wait to get home as mother bought new toy/computer game/etc.

-Wanted to rush home

Body1-Reached the busy road leading to your home.

-It was the peak hours and everybody was rushing to get home, therefore, the road was busy.

-When the road seemed empty, you took no chances and ran...

Body2-Dashing across road.

-*Item* fell out of bag.

-Paused to retrieve *item*.

-Heard a car's horn

-Turned to see a car heading straight for you!

Climax1-Collided with car.

-Description-impact

-Lay motionlessly on the road while driver of car called the ambulance.

-Description:Pain/blood and gore.

-Paramedics arrived

-Laid on a stretcher

-Drove to hospital

Conclusion-In hospital bed, parents by my side, etc.

-Lucky to get out of the incident alive.

-Learnt lesson,...etc.

Coda-Swore not to dash across roads...etc.

Prayer for SA2 by Mr. Thomas

Prayer for the SA2 Exam

We pray that you hold each boy present here in your gentle palm of your hands. Make them feel your infinite love and your grace throughout this day Lord. Grant them peace of mind and heart as they sit for their SA2 paper. Gently guide them and show them your way to success and happiness. Fill them with wisdom and patience as they deal with every obstacle that stands in their way and show them that every challenge is a path that you have specially paved for them. Fill them with peace from within. May they be filled with hope and belief in themselves as they persevere. Lord let us be still and know that you are with us

"Goals are the fuel in the furnace of achievement.

Brian Tracy, Eat that Frog"

"The virtue lies in the struggle, not in the prize."

Richard Monckton Milnes

"

The significance of a man is not in what he attains but in what he longs to attain."

Kahlil Gibran

Remember to write your petitions (if you have any) and pass them up to Mr. Thomas tommorrow

New additions...

2008 SA2 paper 1 model answer for sit. wrtg

Note for nathan(sit.wrtg bklet)

For hmwk, pls scroll down...

Homework for 05/10

English

Synthesis and transformation wksht

Maths
Sa2 revision paper

Chinese
 读作文资料(the powerpoint one)看图作文

SA2 paper 1 2008 model answer

This is the link for the sa2 paper 1 2008 . This is

Mark range is about Content -6/6
                               Language- 6/9
                               total- 12/15

https://docs.google.com/document/pub?id=18q3AfeL920f-chnmd2xt6pgRebeozIyxwNRkyTHQtqQ

Hmwk for 04/10/10

EL:

Paper 1 CHS 2008 by tmw.
Situational writing to kenneth
Compo to matthew tan.

5 schools exam paper.BY TMW

CL:
ting xie tmw if im nt wrong.
-revise   作文资料
-60 questions practice paper

im nt very sure if other subjects have.

see you tmw

matthew tan