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Saturday, October 9, 2010

Darren Heng's Compo planning for Fire

Intro:
  • “Help! Fire!” a woman screamed as she raised her hand and ran around like a headless chicken.
  • Then, the newscaster continued with her speech, telling everyone about the fire that took place at a flat.
  • It jolted my memory as I recollected that fateful day…
Body 1:
  • “Help! Fire!” screams pierced the air as smoke was billowing out of a flat. The raging fire licked the walls as it was almost unstoppable.
  • The intense heat filled the area as the miniature inferno only grew bigger.
  • I watched the wooden windows get charred as I shipped out my phone to call for the fire department. “Help! Ahhh!” a high pitched voice rang from the tenth storey window. However, she never got to finish her sentence when an explosion blew her and a flaming wooden chair out of the room. The mushroom cloud that formed almost reduced the visibility to near zero. My heart thumped as the wait was endless. We helplessly watched the building being destroyed.

Climax:

  • When the fire department and police arrived, they sprang into action. Policemen cordoned the place off. Some firemen brought fire extinguishers to start putting out the fire at once. While others attached a house to a fire hydrant.
  • Most of the fireman dashed into the burning building in search of the source of the fire and survivors in the flames. The rest stood outside the building to spray jets of water into the building. Their coordination was incredible.
Ending:
  • Soot was arising as visibility was near zero. Reporters and television crews appeared at the scene.
  • The firemen rescued all the survivors and had put out the fire already.
  • They walked out of the building towards the media with their chest up high. The reporters asked a string of questions to the firemen

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