Zac's Planning:

Robbery:

Robbery-planning

Intro-Walking home from football/basketball game.

-Decided to take shortcut because of curfew/time.

Body1-Walking through shortcut.

-Description: Odour, smell.

-Darkness(night)was approaching.

Walked faster.

Body2-Football/basketball accidentally rolled into one of the side alleys.

-Went to pick it up but got lost in alley.

-Walked into a gloomy-looking area.

-Description-fear.

Climax1-Felt knife/dagger at throat.

-A gruff voice saying"Hand over your valuables!"

-Description-=fear

-Handed over money.

-A firm voice, shouted"stop where you are!"

-Turned out to be police officer

Climax2-Police chased after the robber/thief/mugger.

-Description:Running, shouting.

-Caught thief.

-Description:Relief

Conclusion:-Police explained why they were there at that time.

-Safely got home

Coda:

Swore not to take shortcuts....punctual....

Fire:

Intro-Lying in hospital bed

-Flashback

Body1-At home doing homework

-Alone with baby brother

-Baby brother-playing with matchsticks

Body2-Baby brother accidentally lit matchsticks

-Baby brother drops the match sticks on the sofa in surprise

-You try to extinguish the fire but no avail

-The fire spread

Climax1-Passerby called fire department

-Description:flames

-Hid in bedroom ,trapped

-Sirens of fire brigade could be heard

-Firemen came through window

-Rescued baby brother and I.

-Fire turned into raging inferno;spread to other houses

-Firemen got people out safely.

-You got burned;wounds being treated by paramedics.

-Description of chaos/firemen

Climax2-Suddenly, baby's wailing could be heard from 18th floor.

-A brave fireman climbed up ladder to rescue the baby.

-Description of tension.

-Fireman(at last)came out with baby.

-Description-joy/relief

-You got taken to hospital to get wounds treated.

Ending-Wounds treated

Incident etched in mind...

Coda-Fire is a good servant but a bad master...

Accident:

Intro-Walking home from*place*.

-Could not wait to get home as mother bought new toy/computer game/etc.

-Wanted to rush home

Body1-Reached the busy road leading to your home.

-It was the peak hours and everybody was rushing to get home, therefore, the road was busy.

-When the road seemed empty, you took no chances and ran...

Body2-Dashing across road.

-*Item* fell out of bag.

-Paused to retrieve *item*.

-Heard a car's horn

-Turned to see a car heading straight for you!

Climax1-Collided with car.

-Description-impact

-Lay motionlessly on the road while driver of car called the ambulance.

-Description:Pain/blood and gore.

-Paramedics arrived

-Laid on a stretcher

-Drove to hospital

Conclusion-In hospital bed, parents by my side, etc.

-Lucky to get out of the incident alive.

-Learnt lesson,...etc.

Coda-Swore not to dash across roads...etc.